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Once in a lifetime love

"Omg wow all the twists and turns kept me gripped "

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Love

"An interesting story "

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Once in lifetime love

"Awesome book!"

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Love story

"I absolutely loved this love story and all the twists. Keep writing no matter people say. Yes you should go through and edit the grammatical errors but that can be learned over time. Over all I loved it very much!"

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Once in a lifetime love

"Great read thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Good story

"Lots of detail. Loved the plot. It was a roller coaster of emotions. Great job."

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"Fffffffffgggggggggggggggg"

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Once In A Lifetime Love

"Short and sweet 💕"

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Aish

"It was ok."

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"Good story, love the plot twists. Spelling could be better, but it is a great read."

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Once in a lifetime love

"The book was good until he turns into a bipolar jerk. He wants to buy a house for them then he leaves her. Then he goes back to Lizzie then wants to find her again. Then snatches her out of Canada by threatening to take her baby from her cause he has the money to do it. That doesn’t sound at all like the man in the beginning of the book. Then she just falls all back in love with him. This is dysfunctional for sure. "

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hilarylinde55

"I've read the author's Notes in the intro. I am not being negative at all for what I'm about to say. The breaks between he said and she said, difficult to follow. One has to read everything again just to ensure where the first one stops and the new one begin. The timelines of what is happening is all over the place. Example: "she found out a week ago that she pregnant....then it's 6months since she left". Some of the things happening is left with huge gaps in between. It can be a very good book. That being said. Do not stop writing. Everyone has to start somewhere and you braver than most, me included."

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