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Gilded Sanctum

" Narrative style of the main character leaves no one behind on the elusive fine line of decisions a man makes when his milieu judges him against the safety of an innocent. Keeping skills-set up against more deserving not so innocents, isn't the same as the redemptive effort to return to the fray for yet another innocent. Author has kept the pace and the hits just keep coming until the last page."

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The gilded sanctum

"This story was compelling in so many ways…the private school setting, the former FBI agent with tons of demons, and the obstacles every step of the way. I was interested to see if Mr Walker was going to be successful in solving his case or if evil would win, although im glad it didn’t. The one criticism I have is that the sections in the past weren’t marked, so they kind of came out of nowhere. Also some of the narration was a little long, taking up whole chapters. I much prefer showing over telling."

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