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Mafia love

"First two part so disturbing. Feel sad for noah.After lee entry the story went romantic."

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Book is great

"Book is amazing. I would read it again and what I’ve read I’ve liked it. The grammar in some of the words aren’t the best but it’s still good."

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Noah

"I think the story move pretty quickly with him getting involved with Lee or whatever I think with all the drama, it says that he went through that he wouldn’t be ready and willing to have sex with somebody else couple days later but that’s just my opinion I think the story move really really fast"

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The Popular Boy

"It is an !awesome story"

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Only thing I have to say is wow 🥰 this book is great

"I love noah and laim they are so sweet,I was surprised he's was a mafia and one thing I dislike is that you did not tell us if they stop going to school or if they graduate I have shared this book with my fellow friends and cousins This book deserves to be rated its just wonderful "

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The popular boy

"Amazing cant wait for the next chapter "

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Good

"The book is moving a little too fast but it's alright. "

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Idk u yet

"Iees Sissy S C 6 J 6j6h6 h 6h 6 6 ht the h f bf bt just t. H y j"

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Very Good Story

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Great

"I love the story and plot it mad3 me fall 8n love with the book instantly"

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The Popular Boy

"So good! Can’t wait for more updates!"

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"The book so far I like it."

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