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The Enternal Live

"This was a great book and can't wait to start the 2nd. There are some grammar mistakes which for me is no problem I can place my own words to keep up with the story. I give an all around 5☆"

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ABSOLUTELY AMAZING

"Read in one day. The characters, the plot, the story, the suspense everything keeps you on your toes. You can't stop until you've read it all. Amazing story. Beware this is a series and the first book ends on a cliffhanger and the second is not complete yet. But still an amazing part. Waiting for the second book to be completed. Plz update fast.. "

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Loved it!

"I loved this story in overall! I can't wait to read book n2 and see what happens between her and Ethan as well as who is chasing her and for what reason..!"

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I love the story

"I love the story"

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Amazing read

"Wonderful story pls keep the updates comings 🥺🙏🥰"

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Awesome story!!!!!

"The book us really good!! I cant wait to read the full story"

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The eternal love

"Love this book!!!! I want more. But I do want Ethan to fight for her and I want valerie to open up a little bit about how she feels and what she wants. Poor Ry but he needs to open his mind and find his mate."

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Wow!

"GREAT story. It pulls you in. I don’t think the summary is anything like the story but that’s ok. I can’t wait for the next book. "

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The Eternal Love

"Love this story not stop reading yet "

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Loved it

"I hope to read more of this story it is great"

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Eternal Love

"Well I'm astounded. The story line is soooo exciting. The twists, the anger, the lust, the drama is so perfect. You have a great story there! Gonna start on the 2nd oooh! ahhhh!"

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The Eternal Love by Ava Star

"I'm glad Val is Alex mate. I'm always rooting for them. Please write a lovestory for Ry meeting his mate too. 🤩🤩🤩🤩 Looking forward for more chapters of this book. You're the best. Keep on writing. 🌷🌷🌷"

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The Eternal Love

"I was totally captivated with this story. I found my self shifting in my faithfulness to the characters. At first I wanted Ry to be her mate but as the story progressed my heart cried for Ethen. I can't wait to read book 2. The technical writing skills need work. I wondered if the author is not English speaking but regardless I was sill able to understand and follow the story."

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Best book ever!!

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The Eternal Love.

"I so love this story. It caught my attention right from the start. I'm hoping that Ethan becomes her mate! Am looking Forward to reading part 2."

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Good story

"Want to read more. Wish you good luck to write more books."

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Reader's review

"Keep writing 💛💛"

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Eternity love

"Beutifull description lovely writing true emotional hot scenes love this book"

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Addicting!! Can’t seem to get enough of this book!

"Love this book!"

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Omg omg omg❤️❤️❤️❤️i love it

"Love al the eay❤️"

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