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Interesting
"I always find poetry on more relatable topics interesting. Tackling depression, insecurities, and self-harm in poetry can be challenging, but it almost feels natural. Most of the rhyming schemes were good and the poems were short and sweet enough. Since it's poetry, it's hard to critique. What i'm giving is just my personal opinion--depending on your goals as an author, it might be better not to take it. I would only advise that you go more in depth with the details. Have more lines that reference something you as the author specifically experienced. Poetry is always more powerful when it comes from a place of absolute truth."
My life in short
"I like how it’s a reflection about the inner feelings "
