The Poison of the Mind

Cora: Decent story. Slightly predictable turn of events but I didn't think at this point it was a possible twist! I enjoy the stream of thought writing style this has, though some proofreading and punctuation could help a few spots. Recommend this for ebooks and forgive a few confusing errors. Enjoyable t...

ysatinuke: Great storyand characters

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Helhall: Before anything else, I’d like to emphasize that I really did like the overall story. Characters were more than two-dimensional, so definitely a plus. I didn’t even mind the shifting points of view.But...There are a couple of things that made reading the story very difficult.1- Punctuation is your f...

Margaret Lambert: Strong womenAuthor not frightened to show women with strength

ltericson: Argh - why now for a review?!!!

mb9svnkb4m: Had some grammatical errors. Great plot.

Suiihera: OMG, I just finished reading your story, and I really enjoyed it! The world you've created is fascinating. As I was reading, I could easily picture the characters, emotions, and key moments unfolding visually.Have you ever considered adapting it into a visual storytelling format such as a comic, man...

Chrissie Aghedo: Great storyline. Left me wanting more for sure. A little different to the others I’ve read so far. Hope there is or will be a next part to this story