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Faithful to his queen

"Absolutely amazing book completely loved it from beginning to end ❤ "

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Faithful to His Queen

"Very good Book so far."

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I need more

"I need more!!!! It’s so good "

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Ms Macu

"It's a beautiful book with tons of obstacles thrown at the main character, but I guess that's what makes it interesting. I am just looking forward to seeing if the ending I have in my mind is the ending the characters will endure. You wrote an interesting book @Alpha_qyeen and thank you for fixing the grammatical errors."

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Faithful to his Queen

"The plot of the story is really very good.. But when the past story or memories come you could write it in italics or something because it's very confusing as it suddenly changes from one part to another...The grammar can have a bit more improvement...I like the story but it would be nice if you would give some space between the past and the present story... I really get confused and have to read twice to know that it has come to the past or present... If this is changed then it's really Amazing story 🙂"

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