What is your opinion?
Intriguing and felt very real
"I loved this story and im not usually one for these types but it captured me and i loved the plot an every twist it had. The changes in characters an emotions felt very real it was like i could see everything with my own eyes happening, such a great story"
Brilliant
"I loved this. I cried (repeatedly) The characters changed and evolved as time past exactly as people do in real life. I am always irritated in a novel when a character maintains a student attitude even when they are working - this evolution is really important to me. Playfulness to maturity and immaturity to experience. The story certainly surprised me and I couldn't believe the huge twist it took - first set of tears! I am not a big fan of long descriptions so this worked really well for me. How the characters were sitting or standing is interspersed with the conversation and story so you can picture it exactly without having to plough through paragraphs of descriptions. Little touches like when he is drawing circles on her hands with his thumbs - perfect - I could exactly imagine the distraction and situation. There is a vividness to this story - it is almost like I have watched a film of it; I am not entirely sure how you did that! I would love to read a longer story - I got through this quickly and am looking forward to seeing what you write next. The book was actually recommended to me by someone who bought it on Amazon - it is the first book I have read on Inkitt and it was an excellent experience."
