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Camp Campbell.. I guess

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Summary

A 10year old girl was at summer camp, with a big crush! She loved him, so. much. Will he like her back?

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

I quietly sighed, as I got onto the bus. I took out a book from my backpack and started reading until it was my stop. “Camp Campbell, get off.” The bus driver said. I got out of the seat into the aisle and walked off. “Heellooo!” The hyper man said. I waved. A short boy with black hair was standing with him, I stared at him. “Oh, him? That’s Max!” The man said. The boy waved and walked away. “Hold on Max!” The man said. “What do you want, David?” The short boy said. “Could you show her around?” I looked at him. He gave me a tour, once it was over he told me a bizzare question. “Don’t you want to escape this shithole?” He asked. “No.. it’s nice here!” I replied. “Eh, then suit yourself new kid.” He hissed at me. I walked around the camp. the things around me seemed cheap, well.. unusable I would say. “Maybe I should follow the boys advice..” I quietly said to myself. A unsusualy hyper girl ran up to me. “Do you want to share a tent with me?! There’s plenty of space!” She said. “I uh.. sure..” I say. Once the girl went away, Max came up to me. “So uhm..” He put his hand behind his head. “N-Nevermind.. I guess” He said as he walked away. I was confused. Is he already trying to flirt with me?! I look and Nerris’s tower. “Oh, do you like my tower? I built it myself!” She says as she runs up to the top. “It’s very sturdy!” She pats one part as it falls. “Nice..” I walk away to David. “Did I just sign up for this shit?!”I yell at him. “I.. uh guess so!” He ruffled my hair. “DONT. YOU. DARE. TOUCH. MY. HAIR.” I yell. “Well it’s going to get messed up in today’s adventure! We are going Hiking!” He says. All of the campers go exept me. “Cmon, don’t be shy!” He smiled and gently pushed me. I walk with Max. “ I like your hair.” He says. “What?” I reply to him. “I mean.. I like the air.” He says stupidly. Oh my god. He was flirting with me! He starts blushing and accidentally slides his hand into mine. I didn’t care so I kept walking. He let’s go and we keep walking. We walked so much I accidentally slipped on a steep part. Max notices me and he was too slow and I fell. He ran down to me and helped me up. “Are you alright?” He asks me. “Yup!.. better than ever!” I say back to him. Wow. He seems like a boy who doesn’t care about anything.. why is he caring that I fell? We stop and David says we can go back to camp. We walk back to camp and all of us sighing gave half of us a headache. That’s when we went back and saw a man decked in white and gray. “Hi kids! I’m Daniel.” The man said as Max backed away. “Come here, Max.” Daniel said as Max walks slowly to him. “Listen here you little shit!” He yells at Max as he holds a knife up to his throat. “Don’t tell David I’m a fucking sychopath or cult person, or I will slit everyone’s throat you love and know.” Max nods slowly and Daniel lets go. “Now let’s learn about-“ He says as I interrupted him. “LISTEN HERE CULT LEADER.” I yell as I walk up to him “If you touch anyone here I will kill you!” I yell again at him. I start blushing a lot and I look back at Max. “ Eh.” He slits my hand. “Oh.” I say as I go back to the crowd. “Nice.” After all of that bullshit it’s 10:00 PM. I look around the tent and sit in the hammock next to the girls hammock. I go to sleep early and wake up in the morning. I look at everyone’s tent and noones there. I felt scared, and lonely. Where was everybody? I walk into the mess hall slowly, No one was there! I thought to myself, oh they are just having an adventure without me, and then I find some black poofy.. i don’t know and get confused. “Suprise!” Everyone yells. I jump and hold my chest. “Jesus Christ! What the fuck was that?” I yell “Its your birthday, (Y/N)!” David says. “This place is shit.” I say as I walk out of the mess hall and into my tent. David frowns and looks at everybody. He walks into my tent. “What’s wrong?.. it’s your birthday.” He says to me. “My mom died on my birthday.” I say crying and putting my head on my legs. Max comes over to David. “Can.. I speak to her?” He asks. “Sure! Just be careful.” David said “Hey, you good?” I nod. He hugs me and we both blush. I hug him back. I take my head out of my legs and cry on his shoulder. He looks at me as I take my head off of his shoulder. He wipes the tears off of my face and gives me his hoodie. “Return it tommorow.” He says with a smile on his face. I felt like not giving it back! “I love you, (Y/N).” He says as he gets up and walks away. I think it was just a saying.

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