What is your opinion?
Interesting book
"I’ve never read a book about dragons before "
Childish with sex scenes
"I liked the story but one thing that was annoying the living day lights out of me is the fact that a grown ass women wakes up and he is not next to her and she start crying... I mean really what is she 5? And the other thing ... she is supposed to become queen so why all the pouting like a spoiled 5 year old... and then the king pouting? Sorry with all the sex scenes and the pouting in between it did not make sense"
Amazing!
"I love the plot and how it is going. I don’t know if you explain it later on but do all the dragon people have little dragons or is it just the king? Either ways, although it is only 3 chapters it’s pretty good not like other books that over exaggerate mythical things. I hope you update soon!"
Intriguing
"Whst a start... had me hooked straight away. Looking forward to see where this leads"
A well written story
"I saw little to no grammer mistakes. I like how the plot starts out soft and calm. The soft plot is a good lead way for whatever direction the author would like to take. I also like how the beginning has a lot of background which helps future confusion on the later chapters. Overall i enjoyed the first three chapters and can't wait for the updates."
YASSS
"absolutely love the author and absolutely love the story!! can’t wait to see a close friend blossom ❤️"
Good
"Amazing, Sis. Keep up the good work! Mae and Drayce are my favorites so far; Little Rue too"
Mrs
"Ok dreamy snd fantasyic"
An ambitious plot but fails to gain momentum
"The subject seems to hold a lot of potential but the story fails to gain momentum in the first few chapters. The writer's imagination is quite good I must admit. Overall a likeable story."
Kneeling Before His Queen
"There isn’t a good story line. Mae goes to a club and it then it addresses she is a fairy and a dragon owns the club and they immediately hook up! He’s been waiting for her to be his Queen forever? A lot of good descriptive background could have explained the main characters lives before they committed to one another. And it seems he’s a dragon but why have all the other 15 little dragons?? Doesn’t make since. It got boring to read and skipped through til the end."
dragon erotica or botched porno?
"Hi! I recently stumbled across this and really wanted to like this story because it sounded promising from the description, but after reading the first chapter and attempting chapter 2, I really could not get into the story's plot. The main character, Mae, is depicted to be this innocent, shy girl at the beginning, yet she brazenly leaves with a random man at a club to meet with ANOTHER random man without telling her sister or a single soul where she went and, seemingly, without regard for her life at all. I was kinda confused as to how fast they jumped to have sex. I understand that they're mates, but there's no character development, no world introduction, no reason for me to connect with the characters in the book. Why isn't Mar at all hesitant when Drayce comes around with scissors to cut off her clothes, or announces in chapter 2 that a dragon orgy is natural? This isn't BDSM, this is borderline rape and manipulation. I love erotica and I read a lot of it, and this just unnerved me at the speed and way in which they were getting innocent. I see Mae acting as a child and Drayce as this manipulative, sexual predator. I'm sure that's not what you intended, but those are the vibes that I'm getting and it's not sitting right with me. I believe you could have a good story if you added more background and allowed us to adjust to the characters before having them realize they're mates. It reads as a poorly scripted porno at this point. Furthermore, there are a few grammatical errors which can be easily fixed! I wish you all the best with your writing career."
Lackluster
"First and foremost, she’s not very smart. Innocent or otherwise, who just goes with a random man? She doesn’t tell anybody else she’s going? It just seems unrealistic. There is a lot of repetition, with a scattering of grammatical errors (such as saying she looked at him, then repeating she looked at him a line later). It’s almost comparable to 50 shades of grey in that the writing style is childish and nondescript—using a passive voice instead of an active. I’d also like to point out that she asks for the mini dragons to stop and he, well, doesn’t. You should have a con-non-con warning. I suppose my biggest grievance is that lack of actual BDSM knowledge here. 50 shades isn’t real BDSM, it’s abuse. Real bdsm requires a hell of a lot of communication and understanding, which just isn’t present in this story. It follows some cliches, which isn’t a mortal sin or anything, but the only “originality” is that a dragon is fucking a humanoid. Overall, it’s not well written, the plot is vastly underdeveloped, and there are a handful of grammatical errors that make it hard to read. Do some more research on BDSM from actual BDSM communities. "
