Inkitt
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A unique story

"This has been a very unique and cute story I wasn’t sure if I was going to like it at first but I really like it I can’t wait to see how it ends up "

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Ezra the helpful Gost

"Really, enjoyed this cute story good for light reading Hope to see more good writing soon "

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I love it. It started out well, slow enough to keep me glued.

"I like the plot of the story. I think the 1st person model you used fits its well. I also like how alive the characters are. I'd recommend this book to anyone, especially those interested in romance. Though if you have issues with the mention of violence, take note."

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Love it!

"I love this hope theres more to come!"

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Good book

"Lobe the story line so far"

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Intriguing

"Really like the story, can’t wait for new chapters "

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a very intriguing tale

"i just started this book today, and i was immediately hooked. all the characters are likeable and dynamic. i may only have read the nine chapters that have been posted so far, but i can tell that the story will only get better. the plot is really intriguing and takes off fairly quickly. the dual perspectives i absolutely love, and i can’t wait to read more. i would recommend. "

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Really cute story

"The story seems really cute, and it's nice that we have both POVs "

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