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Social Experiment

satans_child
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Summary

A girl called Esme and her brother Damien go to the cinema theatre, and things take an unexpected turn when the movie ends and strange music starts playing. Hi! This is the author, and I would just like to ask for feedback because this is the first story I've decided to complete, and I would love to know what I need to improve on. I hope you enjoy the story!

Genre
Scifi,Action
Author
satans_child
Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Part 1

“Esme! We’re going now!” Damien groaned and looked up the stairs tapping his foot impatiently.

“I’m coming, I’m coming. Just give me a minute.” Esme finished off her hair and started quickly putting her purse together.

“Esme it’s been 20 minutes since the last time you said that. Now, I’ve been a great brother waiting for you but-OUCH! What the heck was that for?”

Esme gave Damien a glare and walked out of the door. Esme was happy to go to the movies, but a bit concerned because “it’s an amazing surprise” according to Damien. And Damien and she have very different ideas of amazing. He thinks sport is fun, whilst Esme would much rather be reading or binge-watching TV.

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