What is your opinion?
My new medicine.
"I have a tendency to turn to books that use imagery a lot, and this one is probably my favorite from you yet. This story is my new medicine. I love how this dark path is used to describe the character's personality and emotions as she walks through it. And the fact that nature is inherent to your world makes it a good read for nature lovers, especially during lockdown. It is fast-paced, which to me is something to cultivate. You got me hooked the whole time and asking for more. And... Oh, Ashton. I'm high on the mysterious--fake--friend right now. I can't wait to see how the characters' relationship evolves as the story unfolds. Keep up the good work !"
I 😘 it
"The starting is beautiful, the fact that you are writing something out of this world makes it more appealing. Waiting for more updates"
Caught my attention fast
"The story, even though it only has a few chapters, is very captivating. Cannot wait for more chapters and to see where the author takes it!"
Brilliant!
"Well, things escalate quickly meaning the reader will not at all be bored! Loved the use of the dream that repeated, really created mystery and intrigue. Just need some tying up, grammar, tenses, maybe look at the wording of sentences, but keep it up!"
This is actually pretty cool
"At first I assumed this was going to be boring and all and I would barely read the first chapter but it looks pretty good! Ashton has a really quick personality change, which is kind of sus, but I like how this is going :3 I hope to see more and I am going to guess that the main character ‘Analia’ seems interesting. However I noticed you keep switching from third person to first person, or maybe I jus read that wrong. I want to see more, this is great🌈"
