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The boy you should have loved

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Summary

This isn't exactly a novel but tales of different boys who have been denied to right to a maiden's heart.

Genre
Romance,Erotica
Author
Sir
Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Jeremiah's Empire

[Money can't buy everything ]

Jeremiah, a 17 year old who believes he has the whole world underneath his feet. He was born and raised with a silverspoon. He seems to be highly favoured by the sister of fate until one fateful day he encounters Elizabeth.

Jeremiah Hughsoon leads a well structured and routined life. Its Brazil coffee with his favourite morning meal prepared by his undeniably hot maid his been shagging ever since his dad hired her.

It's Henderson,his personal driver that drops his off at school due to his license being ceased for multiple cases of misconduct of road safety.

It's homeroom at 9:00am that he gets to be around his lackeys and girlfriend who all adore and lust to be him.

Late afternoon its private lessons with Hyumg Lee han his personal martial arts trainer.

Early evening is spent with his father whose known by many victorious names but none more glorious than the money typhoon in the business world.

Late evenings are usually spent on him texting his girlfriend but on rare occasions he sneaks out by bribing Peter the head of security with a couple of hundreds of dollars. Sneak outs spell raves and luxuries parties for Jeremiah.

On the 15th of June he does the usual ritual. Bribe and sneak out, he plans out his routine for the night ahead as he travels to the party. Just when he is convinced that he has the we whole night planned out, fate on the other hand had other plans set for him.

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