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Loving it!

"Perfect for this type of genre! Truly recommend though there’s some grammar errors but you can easily look past them. I hope the author continues this amazing story!"

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Don’t remember

"The book is good and the plot is solid. There are some grammatical errors but nothing I can’t overlook."

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Tracey

"Oh no I hope she didn’t do it x"

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Saved by the alpha

"Wow what is going on who hit Nick in the back of the head and is she really the little girl in the video and what is up with her memory"

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Great read!

"Really good read. Very detailed. Could read it multiple times and never get bored."

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Saved by my Alpha

"Omg I love it. Please finish the book. Can’t wait to read more "

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Good book

"I don't know if I have ever read a book with this type of age gap."

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Amazing

"When will the next chapters release.. can’t wait for them.. want to know what happens next."

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Saved by my alpha

"I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really love this book "

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Cool

"I like it this story"

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It was awesome

"Cliff hanger "

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Jenny due

"Great book,Alpha should know age ain't nothing but a number!"

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Saved by my alpha

"Like. Would recommend to friends. Good story so far. Like the characters and I’m excited to keep reading to find out what happens"

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Saved by my Alpha

"I love this story. I don’t like to be left hanging, but such as it is, I very much look forward to the next chapters."

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Review

"Finally wonder what Holly and the weird guy are up to"

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It's one of the best story so far

"Gosh update soon come on"

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Saved by my Alpha

"The story was interesting and the writer has a good idea of what will capture the reader’s interest. Waiting eagerly for an update. Would love to read it completely and see how it ends!"

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"Book is a good read "

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Saved by my alpha

"Best book ever, looking forward to the next chapter of the book."

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Great book to read

"I really like reading this book, its great to read. Some spelling mistakes but i still understood what was happening."

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