"Last Chance"

"Foenix, Congrats on your submission to Inkitt..............your story line is excellent. After Kaden awakens in the hospital, he remembers he has a son, who was returned to him by the Cara, a Nurse. Kaden had not yet named his son, after his wife's death, and decided to call him Ratchet. The Story is very strong about a family broken, many killed, kaden's son found and given to the Nurse who pledges to watch over his son, and take care of him. The Kaden leaves as his pursuer was after him and will destroy anyone in his way, as he tries to kill Kaden.........the love a father has for his son, who needed to be protected at the first moment......above all other thinks, even the possible death of Kaden.......... There are a few small issues in the grammar and punctuation.........the rest of the story, plot and writing is great.............. william elliott kern note; see your comments below.............."