Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Next Gen

"Best story I have read and I have read a lot, maybe because I have a soft spot for children of different community ie MC. Oh how I wish there was more families who had loyalty and love that you have portrayed with this family. Really heartfelt. Thank you"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Next gen

"It was good but short and would have liked a story not just the descriptions of them and how they grew up. It was really good when it was talking about princess and what happened to her. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Book with potential

"Only a few chapters in. the storyline I am hoping will be good, the start of the book gives you details of each individual and an idea of their personalities and the dynamics of the group they are all interesting and large personalities so I'm hoping this leads to something big. Writing style is OK, it needs spell checked etc. But overall so far really good"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation