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What is your opinion?
Lost love
"I really like the plot but i have to say it's a bit confusing to read as the lines are all joined together, i would suggest to add paragraphs, apart from that it's a great story"
Nice
"Hey Austin Watson, it was nice reading! I think it could do better though. You need to fix your technical aspects, especially where to capitalize a letter at the beginning of a sentence, and proper nouns. Try sectioning it into paragraphs for the reader to read easily. Also, I think the story moves a bit too fast. You should slowly build the story, so its not too much of a rush. These two chapters could have been elaborated into maybe 7 chapters. Overall, I think you will definitely improve!"
