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Mistakes

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Summary

Hibiki has been lovesick for a girl in his class, Machi. He's already killed people for her. But mistakes are made when the wrong people get involved.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
10
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

N i g h t m a r e

The warm, thin, red liquid was all over him. Oh, how he loved it. What could he say?

This moron shouldn’t have fallen in love with her.

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The very next morning...

Hibiki’s P.O.V

BEEP! BEEP BEEP!

I lightly tapped the button on the alarm clock. I stared at the wall for a while, thinking about how great it be if she was next to me.

One could only dream...′

I look at the time, but still distracted by my love.

I wish I could--Oh, it’s 7:36, anyways, I wish I could just--

WAIT

7:36?! Oh, wait, 7:37.

FUCK I’M GONNA BE LATE!′

I jump outta bed and run to my dresser. I frantically start moving my clothes.

DAMN IT, NOT AGAIN. No, it’s FINE I WON’T BE LATE.”

A few hours later...

3rd person P.O.V

Hibiki was VERY late. He got detention cause he was too busy fantasizing instead of getting ready for school.

Happens to the best of them.

But anyways...Hibiki’s eyes starts slowly falling. He was SO bored. He was just sitting there for half an hour. He hated detention, Hibiki would rather be talking to her. Just standing next to her would be perfect.

Oh, love. It brings out the best in us.

Except for Hibiki of course.

Hibiki finally fell asleep, letting himself finally rest...

He opens his eyes to a gorgeous flower patch. Sunflowers were everywhere. Sun was shining, clear blue skies,

and there she was.

She stood there holding a sunflower, it complemented her natural beauty. She noticed Hibiki and smiled, but walked away.

He followed.

It became a playful chase to her. She began running away while laughing.

But to Hibiki,

It was literal Hell.

She was right there. And he couldn’t have her. He ran faster, and faster. The petals of the flower started tearing off the flower itself and floating into the air while he ran. Then the flower began to turn a very deep red. They looked almost droopy. Like a red liquid was dripping off the flowers. Something like,

blood.

The once blue sky turns dark grey, almost black. And her laughter gets louder and distorted. Then the laughter, it slowly changes from laughing to screaming.

Hibiki finally catches up, she turned to him.

Her eyes were hollow black holes.

He began to tremble at the sight. How horrifying she looked.

A blood-hurling scream came from her, yet her mouth was closed.

She screamed,

“HOW COULD YOU KILL HIM--”

Hibiki jerked his head up from that nightmare. As he was leaving detention he thought,

‘Maybe what I’m doing is a mistake--’

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