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What is your opinion?
Wind In the Forest
"There were some sentences, in my opinion that could be a little shortened, but they made sense. I'm already familiar with your writing, so it doesn't bother me as much as say a newer story writer. I can kind of see where the story is going and I like the small suspense it leaves. I can't wait to read more!"
Wind in the forest
"Too short it's probably not finished yet and it doesn't really make sense but it does make u feel strong emotions. "
