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Second go around

"Thank you for writing the short narrative and sharing it with us readers. I am glad that you had a second chance life we didn’t turn out to be all roses and rainbows. Because every choice we make in our life is a long journey that leaves us to the moment we are in now. If we change the choices that we made in the past, we change our future. The future is not always changed better. many people say I wish my parents would have done things differently then I would’ve become a different person. I tell them your parents made the best decision that they could at that time with what they knew and what they had. Looking back we can always think decisions would’ve been better if done differently, but in reality that is the path that we have walked. It is the path that created us into who we are now."

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