Things Fall Apart

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

Kate Schimmer Child: Amazing plot and characters. And so impressive you’ve written a story inside a story. Can’t wait to read more of your work ❤️

Bargara4670: This is a real feel-good love story. I enjoyed it very much. I'll certainly read more by this author.

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

Susan: Nice short story. I liked it

Sami13579: Good plot interesting

Veekay186: I really like the storyline and will recommend it for a relaxing read. It shows love is a sweet light.

Ces: This was good! Short, but really good, and I absolutely devoured it. A fun, spicy read! 🌶️🔥I honestly think this story has so much potential to become a longer, more developed novel. Oliver's behavior and motivations are intriguing, and I'd love to explore his character more deeply and understand ...

Nalza: it was the best romance i've ever read in my life except than Aaron made Kinsley too angry some times and they quarrelled much