Customize readability
Aa

Is it the PERFECT feeling of LOVE?

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

Another short poem is here. This time I came up with a poem about what love really is? Is it to be the relationship amongst perfect beings or the relationship where the one's with flaws are also accepted, cared, adored and loved.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

Is it the PERFECT feeling of LOVE?

Is it just the feeling of Love which makes relationship "perfect"?

Or is it just the right person,

The person who gives you freedom.

Freedom to be yourself,

The version of you that you yourself are afraid of to hold on but equally hollow if let it past away.


Oh is it just the feeling of LOVE? Really?

Or the trust that the person gives you,

The trust that you are worthy of.

The respect that you expect,

The expectations that the person fulfills.


Oh is it just the feeling of LOVE? Really?

Or the person who accepts you in their life.

Acceptance that is unconditional,

To be who you are, or the one you dream of and just feel euphoric to be the one.

Or it is the moment that makes you special,

Special of someone who cherishes you.


Oh is it really just the feeling of LOVE? Like Really?

Or is it just the person whose arms hold you tight to make you feel alright.

The eyes that behold you out of pure love in the morning regardless of the night.

The heart that either skips the beat or palpitates so fast that can outrun the airflight.

Let Blacksoul08 know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

The Contract Wife

Lynne: Beautiful story very enjoyable.well done.

Read Now
The Easter Bunny

Lynne: Beautiful short story with a happy ending.luved it.

Read Now
Bloodlines

Ku_Rolet: The novel was good, and I really enjoyed reading it. I love the leads and their bond, but I have one question that confused me. How could Tristan have been dreaming about his mate since he was a child if Omara was already mated to someone else before him? If Kyle had accepted Omara, would Tristan ne...

Read Now
Fated to My Ex- Best Friend

Victoria: I liked how you described everything so clearly. It made the story very immersive. Do you plan to continue this story further?

Read Now
The Argent Wolf (Coming to Galatea)

Victoria: Your characters feel very real and well thought out. I liked that a lot. Which character is your favorite to write?

Read Now
Broken Halos MC

Lynn Hamilton: Author does an amazing job of creating a story that will make you feel like you’re there and part of the story. Very descriptive and well written. The book has a great plot that makes it interesting and coming back for more.

Read Now
Bear Shifter Secrets

Pam: Great Book is there going to be a sequel. I hope so i enjoyed the book immensely. Solid story line i just want more.

Read Now
My Horny Alien

Margaret Hines: I’m curious to see how Lily does in her new world.

Read Now
The Grumpy Next Door

Jane: A lovely story with good characters.

Read Now