What is your opinion?
I like it
"Please bring more of this🥺"
sooo fun
"I know it takes a lot to write such a great dialogue with humour in it. Keep the good work"
Yes
" Yes I recomend David"
,
"Great one-shot, I'm glad found this. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar."
The gang
"Stupid fools Crazy Rude Caring Love Joy Death Anger Dangerous Nosy Bossy "
Hotshot
"Such an intriguing story. Could not stop reading. Can't wait for the next chapters"
Hotshots
"Great so far"
Must Update
"Moreeeeee... Cliff hanger what happened to them,her mother, his brother,his family Pls...Update you can't end like this Btw. Its quite interesting story i hope you create more stories 👏👍"
Hot Shot
"This story is funny, it gives me anxiety sometimes & lt keeps you guessing This story is funny, it gives me anxiety sometimes & lt keeps you guessing I give it an A+"
Hotshot
" Love the story how they fight back and forth but it's seem they love it's other too."
Love it n no
"Love it n no"
Aneska
"Emma you rock!!!!"
Keep going!
"Great job! Just when I think I've figured it out.....nope! Plot twist. Definitely NOT Team Richard."
Dead
"I would like it to be where I new who was talking an about who"
I Want More!!
"I read this in one day! I LOVED IT! Please update and give us more chapters. I will say I wish I knew what happened to his mom sooner cause I was confused on why a mother would leave her sons (but then we found out later)? Also, it made me wonder why the dad didn't even think about his eldest son being gone and not even thinking about the mom? And the youngest son didn't attempt to call the police (maybe it was because he was young)? Anyway! It made me want more and I really can't wait until you add more chapters. So many twists and turns! 😁"
Emma
"Quite thriller ... Like it"
Good
"Loveit, can't wait for the next chapter 😍 keep up the good work"
Amazing
"I love the story please update soon"
Hotshot
"I can't wait "
Hotshot
"Love the style of writing. "
