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From XOCRYP

"As a short fanfiction , it's AMAZING ! . I really completed it in one night and it was worth it . Loved it so much . Keep it up writer "

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Hump

"Hope it gets better soon"

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HUMP

"The most exiting thing I have read."

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Hi

"Overall the story is amazing plot was well thought through and I like how it was not well rushed through I will not rest till I read all your stories your a very good writer"

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ITS SO GOOD TF

"I LOVE THIS NDJJFJSIW"

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I like it, it's a very good story! Keep writing author-nim! ♥️

"I like the story.. It was great! Keep writing author-nim♥️"

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hump

"This ff was the best ive read so far."

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Hump

"You did a good job when writing the story. It is an amazing story. Keep up the good work"

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Hump

"The story is so hot and exciting."

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JIMIN👅

"I liked the hot parts💦🙈 But they didn't really make it as erotic as I expected😕"

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Creative

"The plot is really good but very unusual for me. The description is satisfactory and I enjoyed the innovativeness with the characters' names. I love the character's interactions and how they got to know each other. It's really short and the added animations help boost your descriptions. I loved that."

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Unknown

"Details and the description of the family bonding and the closeness between the two cousins "

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Short but good

"Even though it was short yet it was really good. The overall plot was well planned and the description was amazing. The thing that caught my eye the most was the writing style and there were hardly any mistakes. I liked it very much. I recommend more people to read it."

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Good so far

"I like the closeness of the characters. I dislike the few details of the acts."

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