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Camping

"Erik is electric in this story"

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Write more

"PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH ERIK AND KARA I NEE MORE!!!!!!!!"

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Fates desire

"Would love to read more of this story ... cosmic "

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Fate's Desire

"I was captivated by this story. I had a very hard time putting this book down to go to sleep. It's definitely a must-read. I think you should continue this story these these characters."

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Fate's Desire

"I think you should write a complete book with these characters. I love their chemistry. And the way they keep coming back together. That is fate and shouldn't be ignored. I see her moving there to be with him. Maybe because my cousin did that to be with her husband. This could be a prequel to a great story. There were some words missing but that's about all I saw. It's a great start to an entire book, possibly a series. Great job. I'm an avid reader so it takes something in a story to catch my attention and hold it. I could stop reading until there was nothing left to read. I really hope you continue with the storyline. "

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Very good - id love more

"Bring me more!"

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Saltine

"Great story, it was a mysterious, erotic and captivating."

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Nice

"Perfect ending. Keep it this way"

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Fantastic

"I absolutely loved this short story. And hope that you will write another one with them, they're too good together to not continue. 💜💜💜🦋"

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Yes continue the story

"I loved this. I would definitely read a continued story of them. "

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Kerri Burch

"I love the story "

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Best app ever I love it

"I love it so much "

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Fate's Desire

"What a great story! 💕💕"

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Tonia

"I loved Fate’s Desire I do think you should continue the story. I want to know if they wind up married . "

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Fun

"Loved !!! Please write another short story !!"

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Review

"I’d like this story to continue. "

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Nice

"Very good wirting and interesting "

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Lovely

"Short, sweet and quick. A lovely read filled with emotion."

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Nice story

"Would love a longer story that allows more character development "

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Fate’s Desire

"Wonderful short story with lovable characters and some sweet sexy sexy. Fate was on Kara and Erik’s side :) "

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