What is your opinion?
Camping
"Erik is electric in this story"
Write more
"PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH ERIK AND KARA I NEE MORE!!!!!!!!"
Fates desire
"Would love to read more of this story ... cosmic "
Fate's Desire
"I was captivated by this story. I had a very hard time putting this book down to go to sleep. It's definitely a must-read. I think you should continue this story these these characters."
Fate's Desire
"I think you should write a complete book with these characters. I love their chemistry. And the way they keep coming back together. That is fate and shouldn't be ignored. I see her moving there to be with him. Maybe because my cousin did that to be with her husband. This could be a prequel to a great story. There were some words missing but that's about all I saw. It's a great start to an entire book, possibly a series. Great job. I'm an avid reader so it takes something in a story to catch my attention and hold it. I could stop reading until there was nothing left to read. I really hope you continue with the storyline. "
Very good - id love more
"Bring me more!"
Saltine
"Great story, it was a mysterious, erotic and captivating."
Nice
"Perfect ending. Keep it this way"
Fantastic
"I absolutely loved this short story. And hope that you will write another one with them, they're too good together to not continue. 💜💜💜🦋"
Yes continue the story
"I loved this. I would definitely read a continued story of them. "
Kerri Burch
"I love the story "
Best app ever I love it
"I love it so much "
Fate's Desire
"What a great story! 💕💕"
Tonia
"I loved Fate’s Desire I do think you should continue the story. I want to know if they wind up married . "
Fun
"Loved !!! Please write another short story !!"
Review
"I’d like this story to continue. "
Nice
"Very good wirting and interesting "
Lovely
"Short, sweet and quick. A lovely read filled with emotion."
Nice story
"Would love a longer story that allows more character development "
Fate’s Desire
"Wonderful short story with lovable characters and some sweet sexy sexy. Fate was on Kara and Erik’s side :) "



