"Avoiding Fate"

"Honey Emily 98............you are on your way of creating a good, story. May I make a few suggestions. Setting the location, the stage where this sewer confrontation is about to take place, the reason it's about to take place, the characters, who are the players in this game, names, descriptions, who the players are and why they are in the sewer waiting for you. Writing is like a movie........reasons for everything and descriptions to enhance the reasons, or outcomes..........in other words, there should be a plot for your story to achieve, the ending or what have you............you are the creator, of this story........continue on, it has great potential and I believe in your ability to make it great....................prepare the World for your Work...........it will be GOLD....... william elliott at https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Dead or Alive"