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What is your opinion?
Enjoyed it
"A really interesting premise that expands out to something dark and horrific. Although it's only a short story the author manages to build enough tension to keep the reader hocked by employing short, laconic paragraphs. My only feedback would be to make the sentences a little more diverse e.g. in length and word choice. A lot of the sentences start with "I". Mixing up the sentence structure may make for a richer reading experience. That being said, the melodic repetitive style may be exactly what the author was going for. Either way this was a great, scary and creative story that I enjoyed reading. "
House across the street
"Woah! It ended way too fast. The story was amazing. Keep the good work going. 🌼"
