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Artemis: The Trail

"I love how she knows how to remember all the technics for her assassinations. If I had that kind of mind power and being able to not get short of breath after a mile then I would most definitely be able have the same attitude as her."

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Interesting very interesting

"Like the point of view being expressed "

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This is that kind of uncliche story!!

"Just as I've said before, I can't really guess what happened next, however it feels a little rushed. I love how the story is still being realistic and there are no cringe dialog or plot so far. Maybe, the story could be more slow on the plot because I feel like there are too many things happened in same time."

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More chapters please :)”

"Great read and perf writing "

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Great novel (:

"I really liked it. I wish it were longer but i understand it takes time. The plot was great and I loved the concept. Quite a bit of detail which didn't leave me confused by anything. 9/10 great job (:"

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Artemis has been an interesting novel so far

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Was really a good story so far…

"I liked the story so far…idk how long it’s been since it’s been updated…I just didn’t check….so hopefully it won’t be too long before it’s updated. "

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Very interesting plot

"It's a very interesting plot. It has some grammatical misdemeanors but overall it's very interesting. "

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A twist i didn't expect.

"This is a typical teenage werewolf romance drama. The main character being an highly trained assassin isn't all that new. But what i really liked. and completely caught me off guard, was that she isn't actually a werewolf but still kinda is. I didn't see that one coming, i wish that this story would have had more content featuring the wolf aspect of a werewolf kind of life though. Finally as a rule of thumb i never give more than 3 stars to any story over a year old with no updates, hope to see this change in the future though with some new chapters."

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