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one of the best books I’ve read

"Literally one of my favorite books now. Jay was iconic, he had like the perfect mix of an hard appearance and a caring inside. In all the books I’ve read before the guys were for my liking way too soft to still match their bad boy appearance but in Jay’s case it was just perfect."

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Love it!

"So,your book and write is quite captivating and I love every minute of reading it I couldn’t stop until d last chapter u updated.don’t no y so many people haven’t read it but trust it it’s quite interesting.thanks for sharing "

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"I couldn't put this book downnnn!!!! When's the next update?? This wasn't the end, was it!?? Sooooo gooood!!!!"

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Wow

"I haven't been able to put it down, we'll done. Love the characters "

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This one is fab

"I love Jay and Lola... God girl, you are the best... Please update soon... Dying to know what's waiting"

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very good

"I love this"

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!!!!

"Amazing book so far I am hooked !!!!! Author is amazing at writing too!!! πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•"

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"Love the story. Where is the rest of it? You can't leave us hanging like this."

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Great Book

"One of the best stories I've read... Love the author's style... One of my favourite authors"

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Fan-Fucking-tastic

"Best book ever!!! Love Jay <33 Hope we will get a lot more of him ❀❀"

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In love with a bad guy

"This story is sooo interesting 😍😍😍"

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Awesome plot . I am loving it. I actually want this novel to turn out to be a romance, thriller, kind of story. Where Lola changes to a badass girl only for jay😝 but same time helping jay from coming out of his so called dangerous world

"I liked this book till now cause the plot is interesting and at the same time its just my kind of book, a book i usually prefer to read ( chemistry between a badass boy and a simple girl) this combo can't be beated. I will definitely recommend this book to my friendsand even my sister. I think if i was writing this book i would name it. "light in dark" or may be something related to this... obviously a lot depends on how the plot turns out "

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"I really love this book It has a very clever ups and downs And the author doesn't rush things And takes it slow with the characters I love it ❀️😍πŸ₯° Hope you update soon πŸ™‚ Lots of love 😍πŸ₯° "

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Love

"More??πŸ₯Ί pleaseeeee"

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I LOVE THIS STORY

"Obviously there are some grammar errors but that's normal because you are a human and not a robot. Lol. Other than that I love it and love the characters especially sweet innocent Willow! "

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Irs fun and cute so far easy read

"Its good ...read the book"

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"I LOVEEEEE IT SO FAR!! Jay is so sweet and hot towards Lola, and he is also a dick but u know what he changes and its even better that she is the one to change him. 10/10 in my book for sure!! I can't wait for more an to see what challenges lies ahead, also I am so excited for them to see that they love each other! YAYA"

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"I’m hooked on this book and can’t wait for more..."

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BAD THINGS

"You can never be bored while reading any of her books and this one is not an exception. From the storyline to the characters, everything is just perfect. I am irrevocably in πŸ₯°πŸ˜πŸ’–πŸ’“πŸ˜˜ with the story."

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"This book is awesome!!! I look forward to reading the rest !"

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