Inkitt
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"Whens the update comming???"

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Unusual

"Very unexpected and I’m glad there is no lewd sex scenes! I hope this has not been completed it’s left me hanging …. Can the people she meets be trusted and what if this alien that’s with her … the blood is more than that why did they match wth is going on? Lol"

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The implicit denial of infinity

"I love the plot line and characters and the style of writing😃👍🏻❗️ Grammar and spelling can always be improved! Hope to see mows chapters soon👍🏻‼️"

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Okay

"N is a good time and I will be there in the next couple weeks and trying not get back with "

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Good read

"I love this book so far it is very interesting. I would recommend this book to anyone that loves a good sci fi novel. I chose the ratings that I did because it is a fabulous book."

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😍 Love it!

"I love this book already can’t wait until you update!🥰 "

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Grwat potential

"I enjoy this greatly and can't wait to see more, I know how hard it is to get a fanbase going on any writing web site so im here to tell you, keep up the great work! I'm sure your story will become a much adored masterpiece!"

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Up to Chapter Eight. So Far So Good!

"I find the premise interesting! I wish there were dialogue early on because the start is quite slow. It's not unusual for sci fi novels, but the pacing can be problematic. Still, I like the main character. I'll try to read more of it when I have time! 😉"

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Buena

"Entretenido"

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Kai's rebellion

"Intriguing storyline, overall well written. Just a shame yhat the lead character for all of her rebeliousness seems very complacent. "

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Aliens

"Very good story"

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The Implicit Denial of Infinity

"I've only read the first chapter, but this story is starting to get interesting. The premise is absolutely believable, which is not usually the case in sci-fi/fantasy. The writing style is better than some I've seen on this site. It's easy to tell, right away, that the author is older than 14. :) I hope the story continues to hold my interest. I'm curious to see if it keeps its authenticity, or if it turns into another erotica with aliens instead of wolves. I hope it does."

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The implicit denial of infinity

"Fantastic!"

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Hello

"I liked that it was a different kind of read. I think Kai is a good name for the MC and can't wait to read more."

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A really slow burner

"Way too much of a slow burner, so much description and very little dialog read a good chunk of what has been published and I’m still waiting for something interesting to happen. A good plot but maybe not the type of writing style l specifically would enjoy but others might "

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The implicit denial of infinity

"It's way too slow"

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