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The laugh

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Summary

A girl named Summer gets a doll for her birthday. Upon researching it, she finds everyone who had it last heard a laugh. With that laugh came bad luck and eventually death. Will she keep the doll knowing this or will she find a way to kill the evil spirit inside.

Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Introdicing......ME

Hello. I am a "normal" teenage girl. I say normal like that because, well, I'm not really normal. My name is Summer Winter. Yeah. Odd name, right? I'm going I tell you a story that happened to me. First, I am going to introduce a few of my friends that witnessed this with me.

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Kara Bailey- My best friend since diapers

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Leo Bradford - My nextdoor neighbor who absolutely ROCKS

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Alyssa Wingford-A girl I just met in my 1st year of middle school

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And me, Summer Winter-some random girl who is telling this story

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So yeah. Thats the gang. If you can't tell from our names, we are complete geeks. Put us alone in a room together and we will destroy everything in sight. In our school, there are 5 main cliques. Up top we have the popular clique. In second place we have the bad boys. In third we have the plastic bitches. In fourth we have the bullies. And in last we have the info-chans. Aka the ones who know all.

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I fit in none of these. However, Alyssa fits into the info chans. Therefore me and my friends know everything about the new kids, bad boys, plastic bitches, etc. Leo is a bad boy (he can't hear me right now so I don't believe he fits into bad boy because he can be a total softie)

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(I HEARED THAT SUMMER)

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ANYWAYS BACK ON TOPIC. We have all come to a conclusion that this is just the beginning of whatever these dolls want. Onto the story.

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I'm probably going to hate dolls after this story. What do you guys think. Anyways. Comment on what the doll should look like if you want to. I could really use pointers on some names as well. I suck at coming up with names if you can't tell.

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And I may only be able to work on one chapter a day so it may be a day or two before chapter two comes out. Every like helps.


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