Good start!

"Current position: Chapter 2 (SPOILER ALERT) Interesting premise! Starting off with the present day and revealing the love interest has already died leave readers hooked to know what had happened. The narrating voice is also good; simple but poignant. Bite-sized chapters would be convenient for smartphone readers. As the story is just beginning, I won't be able to conclude much yet, but personally I feel that the gist/events of the first two chapters should be rolled together into one prologue. as they both happened in the present (or near-present). For example, the female lead could be visiting Braxton's grave together with Seram, her current boyfriend, and his family, (providing they know he's dead) and only leaving a rose for him behind everyone's backs. But if that's impossible plot-wise, then please ignore this comment. And although I say short chapters are convenient, it could also be tantalizing as we wait for updates; chapters should be a little longer once we got into the main body of the story. Other than that, I have no complaints. Looking forward to more!"