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A group of 12 take a vacation on Roxy's luxurious yacht, One of these 12, Ivan Crane the most angry and heart broken of these 12 starts gaining new abilities the closer they get to an island, an island inhabited by the Lochness Monster and the Roc. Unfortunate rather sinister connections are made between the monsters and Ivan Crane, but with the Superhuman Abilities he seems to posses he could be their only hope. Will he use them for good or evil? All I know is that a lot of people will die along the way
So I'm pretty young and new to Inkitt, and I would love to win the thriller/horror contest, so share, like, comment all that jazz, and just gotta say that in the beggining and end, A LOT OF PEOPLE DIE
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Etexdan: Enjoyed the Original story. I think you did improve this story very well. I saw a few misspellings, but I don't judge because I'm the worst and it did not distract at all from the rewrite. You are a very good author that is easy to read and enjoy the story. Keep up the good work.
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Nuggy: This story had me hooked from start to finish. It's hard to put down once you start reading it.Looking forward to reading Snakes story & any other stories you write
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omdd13: holy shit this was amazing , the way you described the emotions were honestly amazing i felt as if i was there, lol kind of i wish i was, but overall i loved it
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Jeanne: Love, love, love, this story! I spent way too many nights staying up way too late reading because I didn't want to put it down.Would love to see this turn into a series or a sequel at the very least. Maybe Conri's journey of healing? Or a next generation?One can only hope.🤞On to your other storie...
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ja1628: Very sweet good plot did not add extra stuff to keep the story line going which is great.
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anesca007: I literally cant find a problem to mention . I like the authors writing style and im honestly terrible at grammer so I wouldn't be able to tell the difference anyway lol . But I love how she describes everything especially the emotions . Would recommend it to all my book friends
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Veekay186: I really like the storyline and will recommend it for a relaxing read. It shows love is a sweet light.
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