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A group of 12 take a vacation on Roxy's luxurious yacht, One of these 12, Ivan Crane the most angry and heart broken of these 12 starts gaining new abilities the closer they get to an island, an island inhabited by the Lochness Monster and the Roc. Unfortunate rather sinister connections are made between the monsters and Ivan Crane, but with the Superhuman Abilities he seems to posses he could be their only hope. Will he use them for good or evil? All I know is that a lot of people will die along the way
So I'm pretty young and new to Inkitt, and I would love to win the thriller/horror contest, so share, like, comment all that jazz, and just gotta say that in the beggining and end, A LOT OF PEOPLE DIE
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