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I like it, but WHOAH

"That was so creepy OwO. I hope the next chapter is more light hearted lol. You have a bit of an odd writing style, but I feel like it probably fits you, haha. All I wanna know is how the hell you thought of that poem, it gave me the shivers! I look forward to more!"

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I like it but...

"How will her classmates react to her acting like a boy? If they recognize her as something different, I don't think things will change. But, overall, I like it! The plots decent enough and I can't wait until we meet Bon.! Happy writing, and I can't wait for more!"

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Good Job!

"I really like this so much! It's very good, but just so you know, Rin does seem a bit MAry sueish. But overall, it's a very good idea. Just a question, are you going to let Father Fujimoto live? Most AUs I read don't do that, so I just wanted to know in case I get my hopes up and start anime crying like Rin"

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