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NEHL-Jack

"Fantastic story. Loved reading every second could barely put it down. I want more!!! Keep up the great writting."

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FANTASTIC

"Absolutely love this book so heartwarming and all about family, and friends "

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So sweet

"Very well written. Jack and Maddie were so cute. Highly recommend. I do hope you turn this I to a series. There are so many players to choose from. I think Eric should be next. Also, we need an answer to that last question! Keep writing, and best of luck to you."

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NEHL-Jack

" Very cool story. It's a good read. Well-constructed characters. There are some minor grammatical errors, but they do not significantly affect the reading experience. I recommend it to every romance lover."

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NEHL Jack

"I really, really enjoyed that ❤️❤️❤️"

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AWESOME Story!!

"Everyone needs to read this story! It may start off kinda slow, but hang on, keep reading and you will not want to quit!! Such a wonderful plot, great characters and true life events that will lead to emotional responses from any reader. A story about finding your place, finding and loving that special person, loving a sport, and the people around you. Great qualities and emotional moments in this story. More people need to read this author's work. I will be reading more from this author. Thank you author for sharing your writing! 😃"

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Nhel jack

"Great short story, to the point. More detailed about hockey and mgt of sport. Learned a lot. "

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"Absolutely loved this story!! I laughed and I cried!! Love that is was around a hockey player!! Best story in a long time!"

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NEHL - ,Jack

"This is a romantic story that will definitely hit your heartstrings hard. I enjoyed reading it even though I didn't know anything about hockey but was able to enjoy the relationships that were formed with the team."

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Enjoyed it

"Really sweet read. Tugged on your emotions with the supporting characters. Minor grammar errors, nothing that took you from the story. "

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This needs more reads

"Amazing story. Made me cry, made me want a Jack. I don't know anything about Hockey but I loved it and I'll be checking out your other stories."

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NEHL JACK

"This was a great book. I'm from Niagara Falls ( near Buffalo) so this story hit home. The fans have always been about helping out others when needed. This story could be based on a true story so easily. Keep it up. I hope you write a part 2. "

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NEHL-JACK

"Absolutely amazing loved this book so sweet definitely a tear jerker in a few parts but incredible book💖💖💖💖💖💖😺😺😺😺😺"

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