Back to Story
What is your opinion?
Fantastic voice
"I really liked the characters. I would suggest maybe lengthening the chapters a little bit. The first chapter was very good, but I wish you had given more background and had shown the story world a little better, along with establishing the relationship between the two characters somewhat sooner. Overall, I really liked the story, your writing style is amazing. Keep writing! "
Good start
"A promising story with bitable chapters and interesting characters"
