What is your opinion?
Compelling
"Good fast start with a lot of direction possibilities. Now that the theme, plot, and lead characters have been identified I can see where the story will go. I look forward to see how their story will progress against the superior government agency as it tries to capture the duo and how their budding relationship unfolds. I'm not sure how much of the starting details are just for setting but I would put more details in the initial character development to help build that initial bond with the lead character but then those same details can morph into the illusion of the world he once knew and be used to progress the story-line and/or send the character down false assumption later to add twist and turmoil in the minds of the character(s). Great Start!."
Fast-pasted and twisty!
"I enjoyed how quickly the action started and the twists and turns the protagonists adventure took as his new world came into focus. I would have liked to get to know him a bit better by seeing an example of his character in action in his old life."
