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AMAZING

"PLS CONTINUE SEQUEL I LOVE THE STORY AND THE PLOT BUT THE ENGLISH WAS ROUGH AND FRIESTAR KILLS TIGERSTAR BY THE WAY AND SPOTTEDLEAF IS ALSO SOPPOSED TO BE DEAD BECAUSE MAPLESHADE KILLS HER AND RAVENPAW DOES NOT JOIN THUNDERCLAN AND THE BARN WAS NOT DESTROYED LIKE YOU SAID. OH AND ALSO SANDSTORM AND FIRESTAR ONLY HAD ONE LITTER OF KITS,LEAFPOOL AND SQUIRRLEFLIGHT. OTHER THAN THAT I THOUGHT IT WAS AMAZING!!!"

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One Of The Best Fanfictions I've Seen

"Very outstanding Fanfiction! I can't believe how good the plot, writing style, and overall story fit together! The plot is very creative, as I am sure that the official Warriors Series never had such a mass rebirth like this one. The only thing I can complain about is that this story has some grammar issues, but I don't really care about that because English wasn't your first language anyway. Overall, I could say that this is a great story! I can't wait for more of the story to come out."

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Very interesting, though the English is a bit rough

"I love the concept! The writing is a bit rough but I understand English is not the writer's first language? It makes it a bit hard to read but I look forward to more regardless! The technical aspects could use quite a bit of work. There are times I'm not sure who is talking. Also the use of the word "meant" is interesting. Not used in a way I am used to but I understand the intention. I truly love the idea though and find it wonderful. Very great thoughts! Not sure how I feel on the cats knowing who they are from the kit hood but I suppose it works. I just think it may have been more interesting to see them figure out who they are later."

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