Thundarr the Barbarian in friends and enemies

"I was born in 1972, always a fan of fantasy and sci-fi. I started playing dungeons and dragons around 10 years old, watched about every sci-fi movie and cartoon i could. I was a obsessed geek. I have played and game mastered over over 50 role playing games, with Shadowrun, and D&D 5th edition as my top 2 favorites. I must say......I did enjoy this story, it was the kinda mash up, that says it all. Thundarr was my favorite cartoon from my childhood, with the D&D cartoon a close 2nd. While the 3 minor spelling errors should be corrected, the feel for the story, and the writing style, has the feel of both cartoons, and allowing the violent side to come out and play was refreshing, while those that would not kill, had the correct flavor. Good Story- oh and the hockey mask, scene made me laugh SO HARD.......ha......kudos Write some more, does not matter what you write, continue, I think you will go far believe in yourself Spellwalker"