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The Romanovs

"Very good story I like the authors Storyline and character development, lots of action and erotica . Looking forward to more chapters."

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So Into

"Love this type of story as it’s rough around the edges and not all powder puff romance. Love the characters."

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You have captured me

"I am loving this story. I hope that she heals hims and the reign together."

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The romanoffs

"I love this book it keeps me interested all the way through"

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Good

"Pretty good, novel idea"

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Awesome book needs a little editing.

"I really like this book, however the plot seems lacking. I do realize this is an erotica book, and that means sex, but I loved the beginning of your story so much. And I think you should incorporate more plot twists and maybe add a internal or external conflict or two. "

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Natalie and Nadie

"Pretty easy going story by now"

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The romanoffs

"I really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading more of your stories in the future"

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Good

"I love the book it's amazing the characters are perfection the plot everything feels so real i fucking love it it's just wow"

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Good but poor execution

"It’s good but the text is lazy - this author hasn’t taken the time to realise that people want to read her book. There’s a lot of grammar and punctuation mistakes. The sequence of the first chapter is weird, the first chapter there should always be a hook, something that brings us in and makes us release why we should be reading this book and I didn’t get that with this book - unfortunately. Keep writing, I loved your writing style it’s very dynamic!"

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The Romanoffs

"I look forward to reading more chapters ❤️👍🏼❤️"

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??????

"Not making sense at all. I don't understand the plot. A lot of smut in fact too much l. "

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