Inkitt
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A diamond in need of a good polishing.

"Is definitely a work in progress but is definitely worth giving it a go. Criticisms are welcomed. "

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SO GOOD!

"The blurb had me laughing right away! I had to know more! A really amazing read! I felt so involved in the story, please upload some more chapters! Thank you!!"

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Brill

"In love this book,it's amazing I can't wait to read more. I enjoy your writing and I enjoy your knowledge of all magical things they don't exist haha but you made it feel real... Can't wait to continue "

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Forgotton

"Great storyline got me hooked really quickly, some grammar mistakes and a few words missing, all in all a Great read can't wait to see where this goes. Great work"

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Rhino Taylor

"Hi I enjoyed reading, the story flowe, chapter's r a bit short but the characters r defiantly coming to life nicely, well done Samantha I look forward to the rest of the adventure, tally ho! "

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