38 chapters read

Jun 13, 2020

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"The beauty of this book is indescribable. The suspense and the wait for the updates coming were so difficult because I knew that this author was going to make each chapter even better than the last. I cried during this book, I laughed, I felt happy and I felt some pain the characters were put through. It really is difficult explaining this book in words. The best I can say is that this book is going to be big. Trapped Love is a book about friendship and going through school. It explains what it's like to have hard choices and confusing questions you ask yourself every day. It shows how great it is when you have friends you can always count on. Trapped Love is a book about being yourself and having confidence in yourself and your friends. It shows sacrifices ready to be made for everyone you love. The sincerity in my words during this review are beyond what you could comprehend. I truly don't have words for how incredible this book is. I could read it 100 times and always have the same feeling throughout each word, each chapter. Trapped Love, the friends, the family, and the love spread through every character this author has created, is something I wish I had. Something I wish everyone who needed it could have. Because no matter what they went through, they were there for each other and would never leave. Lola's friends and family had her back and we ready to stand by her side for whatever she needed. And that my dear friends, is something incredibly special."

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melissapaxton1

26 chapters read

Apr 18, 2020

Love it

"I hate being left in suspense. I want to know what happened in England with the boy that is haunting Lola so much. Hope to be able to read the finish soon. "

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𝐆𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐞 𝐇𝐚𝐫𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠

3 chapters read

Apr 4, 2020

Brilliant!

"I seriously love this book and the only reason why I didn't give it five stars for each is because I feel like it can be improved through each point. However, having said that, your story is absolutely amazing and you are a very talented writer! Keep on practicing and practicing more and over time your book will get better, after all, all authors need to keep writing and writing etc. I recommend looking at the website: 'the editors blog' on how to edit and expand your knowledge of writing. There are all sorts of tips and articles on different parts of writing! Also, whilst I am a big fan of cliche stories, I have read stories that have slightly similar plot lines, for example, when main characters bump into eachother and the way Lola's mother abandoned her and her younger sister for a while. I've read quite a few books with these ideas in and I don't mean to be harsh, but it doesn't feel as origional as you could make it, especially with the whole secret and past that she can't let people know about. However, that is not to say that your writing is bad -- it is quite marvellous with only a couple of mistakes which, let's be honest, everyone makes mistakes and that's fine. I recommend trying to find a beta reader to ask for their true opinion to give you a better idea of how to improve you're plot lines. Please don't hesitate to go outside the box and write whatever you want but don't let it be inspired by the ones on wattpad, or at least, the clichés on wattpad. I hope this makes sense!"