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What is your opinion?
Pretty good, but could be better
"I’m speechless. I just don’t know what to say. It’s just so good, hope u keep going The way u describe the animatronics gave me clear images of how they looked (fex Shadow Bonnie’s rusty and old endo when Freddy met him). I especially liked the personalities you gave each character. The only things u need to improve is your writing (u spelled "very" like "vary" often) because writing really impact the way people judge ur story. Good idea of putting the pizzeria in an amusement park, never would’ve been able to imagine that on my own. Btw, I would love to hear what u think of my review on your story -XGoldenFoxy29X "
BoC : Five Nights In Paradise
"I like the concept. It seems plausible enough. I would recommend this story to young adults."
