When Hearts Collide ( The Love & Becoming Series)

Quenda: Overall a good story. Looks like it is in need of a good proof reader as it contradicts itself at times...but overall a good story.

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

Jkind12: Good story!

MiinaReads: I loved everything about it. From its ups and downs and all the emotional rollercoaster rides this story had.💜May all of us find this type of love in our lives.🤲🏻✨

DaRtHVaDer : Goodffggxc

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

Karen Nagy: This is a wonderful story with warm, endearing characters. It shows growth and acceptance of individual differences combined to make a strong unit. Loved the characters and enjoyed the writing style. Can't wait to read more!

jonahlee: at first i though it was a historical romance but realized it was a modern novel.I loved it ,great storyline

barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama