Chapter The Church of Yves | End Of Eden by aylin at Inkitt
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End of Eden

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Summary

In which Lydia and her best friend, Rachel, enter a whole new world.

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Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
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Age Rating
13+

The Church of Yves

THE GOSPEL

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In the beginning there was darkness. In that darkness, He built a land: Eden.

He placed a powerful being in that paradise. The being was to imitate him, 7 beings in one person. But these beings attempted to act like their creator, and they tried to create a being themselves. He did not like this, so He sealed away the beings from the garden and sealed them away to the Underworld.

He then began to create everything else in the Universe: The sun and the moon, night and day, creatures and places. It was good.

The first form that the beings in the garden would take would be that of a beautiful woman, placed in the garden and told not to eat a forbidden fruit; Yves took form and decided that this was not good. She peeked over to planet Earth and saw what He had done while keeping her locked away. Yves began molding the beings' form similar to what He did, a human. But Yves would not stoop so low as to be a true human.

The beings, in the sight of their mind, created their own DNA chromosome, one with power and knowledge, the yyxy.

The beings' first form was now complete within Yves.

Youth.

Before long, the second being became infatuated with what Yves had manifested in the garden, she was in love with Yves and wanted to impress her in any way she could. Plotting in the depths of the beings' mind, Charity took form over Yves, causing Yves to disappear. Borrowing the power from their yyxy, Charity manifested Yves alongside her.

Youth.

Yves, feeling betrayed by what Charity had done, decided to ignore the new appearance of Charity.

Yves had lived in the garden the longest and grew tired of what it held. Sensing this, Charity used the power of the yyxy to create a beautiful house for the two to live in.

Yves, still unhappy with what Charity did, politely took the room in an opposing wing of the house. Charity, feeling defeated, turned in the beings' mind to their first creation, similar to the 6 persons, this inverted being decided to take its turn to display itself in Eden.

Using the power of the yyxy, Charity let the next girl manifest in an attempt to persuade Yves into forgiving Charity. Seeing as this inversion was also Yves' creation, Charity believed the inversion would be able to do this quickly. This newly manifested girl was Hope, with black hair and curiosity in her eyes, Hope looked at planet Earth, seeing herself in His creation of humans.

By.

Hope used the power of the yyxy to help manifest Charity alongside her. The second and third girl made an arrangement, Charity would help Hope contact a human and Hope would help persuade Yves into forgiving Charity.

The girls planned to make a trade, Hope would first approach Yves and ask her to forgive and accept Charity. Second, Charity would help distract Him so Hope can switch with a human for a brief moment and learn about humans.

The girls got ready.

Hope talked to Yves, and with the eyes of a child looking into her mother, convinced Yves to forgive Charity. Hope rushed to Charity's room and they used the power of the yyxy to switch two beings. When Hope disappeared from Charity's sight, Charity ran to find Yves and confess her love and admiration.

Back on planet Earth, Hope met a wonderful human who was called Catherine. They talked for as long as He was distracted.

Yves and Charity were interrupted by a lady who was called Aderyn. However, He knew what was happening and blocked Charity from seeing the lady and the lady from seeing Charity. He flashed Aderyn back to planet Earth and brought back Hope to Eden.

He created another being, a teacher. One to hold the girls in Eden and to keep an eye on their behavior so the universe wouldn't have to. This made the 4 beings angry.

Inside of Hope, the final being awoke, and broke through the third girl. Charity and Yves could not believe what they had seen. Fearing that the third girl had died in the process of the final manifestation, they banished the fourth girl to the dungeon of the mansion and named her Lyssa.

Young.

Using the power of the yyxy, Charity and Yves brought back Hope in a new manifestation.

All four beings, now having a form, were trapped within the walls of the house of Eden, with a tree at its center, the one of forbidden knowledge.

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