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Pay attention

"Lots of left and right turns pay attention or you will an important part of the story "

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The Alpha's Twins

"I like how the Luna was on the run to kill whoever made her family suffer."

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It’s a good story

"I like the writing style of the author and how the story has developed so far. Looking for a twist in the story as a royal pure blood werewolf ."

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Omgomgomg

"I am loving this so far I hope it hasn’t been abandoned by the author. Hopefully there will be an update soon "

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The alpha ‘s twins

"This book is so amazing,a must read pick it up."

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Love it!

"Love it!! I love the plot"

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The Alpha twins

"Love this book i can not wait until it is updated such an amazing plot line, job well done and it will more than likley be one that stays in my library."

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The Alpha's Twnis

"I like it and can't wait to read more. "

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The Alpha's twins

"Easy to read i lie the book"

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Alpha twins

"Book is good enjoy reading it "

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Very interesting indeed

"Nice story very different "

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Very captivating plot!!

"There are times where I cannot keep up with the timeline in the initial chapters. Would appreciate if you fix that. But otherwise, the book's amazing!!"

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Awesome

"I crave more of this book, well written, can't wait for the update ."

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Sooo good!

"Love the story and the characters. It’s hard to believe that the twins have done this at 6 years old so I hope that the way that it will be explained will be good considering that they Have been wondering to know their dad all this time while watching him on camera...i don’t get it so far...the writing is better than some others that I’ve read but please be careful with the punctuation...I hate to Have a dot or a , at the wrong place of a sentence it cuts the beat of the reading much more than some spelling errors. Thank so much for this good story please don’t stop!"

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Jesus Christ I love this

"I swear to god this book just took my breath away!!!!"

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Great book

"This book is awesome and keeps you wanting more. I like the characters and the plot. I can’t wait for more! The writing is good as well. This author does an excellent job. Recommending to my sister and cousin. "

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The alphas Twins

"Great reading"

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The Alpha’s Twins

"The story seems to start off great. The problems I have are the time jumps. One second they are sixteen then all of a sudden, they are eighteen. No warning or notice of age changes and time periods. There are some writing errors, but I am no writer either. I understand the story and writing, if not, I just put it into my own words or understanding. But, it is a good story so far. "

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Hbtbybyb

"Vyvtvybg gvtbh"

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Loving this book 📖 😍 ❤ 💕

"This is one of the best werewolf books I've ever read ❤ 🙌 😍 I hope you keep updating on the regular 😀 👍 😊 "

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