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Mermaid

"I really like this story, characters continue to grow, it's very interesting "

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Mermaid

"I enjoyed the story very much.it was a really good read πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’―πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘"

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Mermaid

"Absolutely brilliant!!! I have sat reading this for hours. Couldn't stop reading it. Fantastic story well done. Can't wait to read more of your stories"

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Amazing read

"Never read something like this before and I was throughly impressed by the author’s creativity and imagination. There were some grammatical and spelling issues but I was able to look pass it due to the intriguing plot."

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It was great but where is the immortal man she disappeared with?why isn't she n him living happily every after or some what???

"The ending was too abrupt "

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Very good book!

"I've been reading you book and i loved it! It's one of the Best books i read on Inkitt! There were some grammatical mistakes, but I still enjoied reading it very much! It would be great if you writte a Sekond book. Good Job. Keep up with the good work! :)"

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Mermaid

"I have to say im amazed. Im used to reading books like this but instead of the woman being herself through and through she changes for some man. But this story hit the mark of different. I enjoyed this book so much and i wish people wrote like you do. I recommend this to young adults or anyone who likes reading this type of tale. Keep up the good work😁"

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Mermaid

"I loved this book. It was wonderful. I would recommend this book to my friends and family."

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Mermaid

"Very good developing of characters and narrative "

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I love this story! So different and well plotted out 😊

"I love this story! So different and well plotted out 😊"

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Mermaid

"I have never read something like this, so imaginative and plot connections are amazing,"

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Mermaid

"Loved this story well done πŸ’•"

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Mermaid

"Overall it a good book.... But i feel it is a bit slow for my taste "

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