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"This story is intriguing and I can't wait for more! I especially like the suspense in chapter four!"
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"Okay, here’s my official analysis of the book: It’s really fast paced. You got through like 4 chapters worth of book in 2. This isn’t necessarily bad, because it makes the book shorter and some people may not want to take six years out of their lives on an 800 chapter book. Punctuation was questionable. This was the only actual error I found, sometimes in speech it would say some thing like “yeah mom?” when it should be “yeah, mom?” Again, this isn’t bad and most people won’t notice, but I’ll notice and I’ll be sad •____• Plot structure is good, but a few details need to be sprinkled here and there to make it more believable. Overall, I think this was a good story so far. It definitely needs some tiny improvements but nothing major. It’s a really good idea too, I really want to see it evolve. Anyhow, this has been TaffyCatInfinitis Grand Review. Thank you for coming to my Ted-Talk™️."
