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The Marauders

"AMAZINGGG! PLEASE FINISH SOON!"

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One of my favorite books

"I love this book I've always wanted a story about the marauders and here it is Its really good and I've always wanted to know how padfoot prongs and worm tail sound Moony's secret it is perfect "

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AWSOME/MORE PLZ/PLZ INCLUDE WOLFSTAR

"MORE MORE MORE ALSO CAN ENCLUDE SOME WOLFSTAR ACKA (REMUS × SIRIUS) THX AND YAY"

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The Marauders (review)

"Hi, it's an amazing story, however, your SPAG (spelling punctuation and Grammar) isn't the best- I was wondering if you had anyone reading over your work in advance? If not, you should really get a BETA reader. My apologies if I sound rude, 'Cause I just love creaming people- it's my favourite dessert... By the Way, I would be more than happy to BETA your story (For British Things) if you still need a BETA for British Slang"

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